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 Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 8:37 pm Post subject: create your own poem |
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here i guess i will start;
Sad sad sad in blue
For sad sad sad you
The moon is all bluish tonight
The night is all dark out side
Nowhere to run
Sad sad sad in blue
Into the night hold me tight
Love me babe I need some light
What's wrong and what's right
When shadows dwell and abide
Sad sad sad in blue
For sad sad sad you
The moon is all bluish tonight
Is there some star shoot in sight
To wish upon
For sad sad sad you
Into the night take a flight
Feelings, touch, everything out sight
Love me with feelings ok
Come come babe now closer stay
Sad sad sad in blue
For sad sad sad you
The moon is all bluish tonight
Is there some star shoot in sight
To wish upon
For sad sad sad you
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| Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 1:30 am Post subject: Good job!!! |
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I like poetry. You did a good job. You can always express your self in writing and I do it a lot but has been a long time since I have wrote a poem. I might just have to do one now. I will work on one and see what I come up with in between watching my two kids. Great job again.  |
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| Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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yes that is true, i also like poetry.
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well people call me a gay nerd cuz' i am 13 and i like poetry.
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| Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 10:46 pm Post subject: |
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ohh i see wut u mean, thank's for the tips.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:28 am Post subject: |
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Pizza tastes good
even if your in the hood
I like mine with cheese
Dont forget to say please
If you dont say please you have no manners
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 5:01 am Post subject: |
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Ill never forget that fateful night.....
When the prettiest thing came into my sight....
She must have been just one of a kind....
So sweet and beautiful it blew my mind....
She looked like an angel sent from above....
As I stood there watching my heart filled with love....
I knew deep down she could never be mine.....
So I stood there looking as if it were the end of time....
And eventhough she walked away....
Theres something I still repeat to this day....
Ill never forget that fateful night.....
When the prettiest thing came into my sight....
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 3:03 pm Post subject: |
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| i prefer my poem hahahahaha |
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:48 pm Post subject: |
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Here Try this
"Love is not a thing to understand.
Love is not a thing to feel.
Love is not a thing to give and receive.
Love is a thing only to become
And eternally be. ."
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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Lets sell our poems and see who gets more money homelessthinker... 
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lol, thats not that reasonable :/
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i will make the most off my 2nd poem prbally :@
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 6:30 am Post subject: my darkened soul |
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fire burning in my darkened soul
will i ever wake up to some
they will never know
im lost on the path i must take
where do i turn where do i stand
who do i love who can i trust
a wall is surrounding me
smothering my chances to be me
to be able to succeed seems
only a mystery
the light is forever dimming
and i have to face the facts
i can never get rid of
the past it follows like a huge sore
reminding of a girl who was so
care free and now is a young adult who
will always be just average
who will never be out on top
like a night mare that
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| Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 7:46 am Post subject: |
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edsta was from a town called denang
and he like to suck on a popsicle
oh wait that dont rhyme darnit!!!! |
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